Bài viết mẫu IELTS 8.0 - Percentage of women in employment from 1950–2010 by level of education

Đăng ký bộ dự đoán đề thi IELTS, Sách/Tài liệu/Khóa học IELTS: LINK

Chuyên đề 10/07/2021 – IELTS Writing Task 1 – Line graph với bài viết mẫu Model Answer 8.0+. Jenny biết sẽ có nhiều bạn chỉ đặt mục tiêu target 6.5 thôi, nhưng nếu học được luôn phương pháp IELTS Writing 7.5+ hay 8.0+ thì càng chắc ăn hơn phải không?

Model Answer for IELTS Writing Task 1 8.0:

This graph shows the changes in employment of women with different levels of education from 1950 to 2010. The levels of education are separated into three categories: high school, graduate, and postgraduate, and the data showing how many of each group were in employment is given in percentages.

During the given period, the percentage of women in employment from all three groups somewhat converged and then declined uniformly over the latter half of the period.

In 1950 a high proportion of high school-educated women worked in comparison to women with a post-graduate qualification. Just over 80 percent of high school women were employed compared to around 55 percent of post-graduates. However, in the 1970s the percentage of women working in these two groups converged, at approximately 75 percent.

Overall, the graph shows that the level of education attained had a greater impact on women’s employment in the past than more recently.